Katherine Mankiller

Aha!

I think I've got it!

I've been slogging painfully through Lizardfic--it has a lot of world-building, and it's all very complicated and I've been trying to work it in smoothly--and I just realized that...

My protagonist isn't very emotional. And she probably should be, considering.

I think if I go back and work that in, it'll be easier to finish.