My "just not right" story is up at Critters and has already received three critiques. Unsurprisingly, the critiques suggest that I've again fallen prey to my most common uncritiqued story problem. I try not to spoon feed readers and let them figure things out on their own rather than just coming out and saying, "Look, it's a conspiracy, okay?" but sometimes I go too far in the other direction.
In short, they're not getting things. OTOH, I'm getting a great map to the unclear parts of my story. LOL.
Sadly, Brian gets it. He always gets it. Otherwise, this would always be his task. :)
Happy Thanksgiving!
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