Katherine Mankiller

first draft of script finished

I'm pretty sure the first draft is finished--I've tied up the pressing loose ends--but it's short. I've sent it to my friend Misha for comments, because she is a generous, rocking kind of person and volunteered.

I'm pretty sure I can find plenty more to say in the next 12 days. No, really. Probably not an issue.

I reread it, and I still think it's funny. Since it's a comedy, that's a good sign. Hopefully it will continue to be funny throughout the revision process. I found bits I want to tweak, especially at the beginning, but for the most part I think it's consistently funny throughout. *crossing fingers that I'm right*