Filed under: short fiction
My “just not right” story is up at Critters and has already received three critiques. Unsurprisingly, the critiques suggest that I’ve again fallen prey to my most common uncritiqued story problem. I try not to spoon feed readers and let them figure things out on their own rather than just coming out and saying, “Look, it’s a conspiracy, okay?” but sometimes I go too far in the other direction.
In short, they’re not getting things. OTOH, I’m getting a great map to the unclear parts of my story. LOL.
Sadly, Brian gets it. He always gets it. Otherwise, this would always be his task. 🙂