Katherine Mankiller

February 1, 2004, 9:25 pm
Filed under: short fiction

Jen found much to fix in the time dilation story. Curses, foiled again! 🙂
As far as I can tell the biggest problem is the technology level in the story not being unclear. Well, okay, probably a better way to phrase it would be unclarity in general, which is often my bête noir. I always assume people know what I’m talking about when they don’t, and the longer I look at a story the more I do it. Alas. And Brian is no use; he always knows what I mean because he’s my hunka hunka burnin’ luv.
Better to find it now than to send it out unclear, so yay! and edit, edit, edit.

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